Monday, 19 January 2015

OMNIPRESENT
Yell at Serene Omnipresent
      Amazing Treasures ever descent
                     Adorable Memorable Supernatural
                           Lovely gifts Remarkable and Immortal

Liberates from threatening evils
Arming with shield from devils
                   Holy Champion of all perseverance
                  Dot and beg Him with reverence.
PRELUDE:
The poet is highly pious in nature. He daily starts his day only with prayer. He has a prominentdesire in prayer. He has long-lasting belief that all the events and happeningsgo around him are only due to God. He also believes that God is present everywhere. So he started his first poem with the title ‘OMNIPRESENT’which means that ‘God is Present Everywhere’.
        The poet feels that many poems written by different poets are interpreted in different manner in accordance with the mentality of the reader / interpreter. Mostly, the intention of the poet and the basic concept of the poemismisinterpreted in such a manner that the whole content of the poem is entirely deviated from his/her original thoughts.
        This shows that the purpose of writing the poem is not achieved and the concept of the poem does not reach the reader as perceived and expressed by the poet.
        Therefore, the poet explains conceptual framework conveyed by him in each and every line of the poem. It does not mean that the reader should confine his thinking with what is given by the poet. He puts forward his views and expects the readers read the poem along with the track given by him and frees the readers to interpret the meaning and concept of the poem at their own pace of thinking. The poet leads the readers in the tracked thinking and frees them to think in their own multi-faceted manner.
Frame work:
        The poet has written the poem in eight lines. In order to restore the poetic sense, like rhyming words, he combines consecutive odd and even lines.
The Rhyming Words in this poem are:
        Line Number
First Pair
Line 01 &Line 02
Omnipresent
Descent
Line 03&Line 04
Supernatural
Immortal
Line 05 & Line 06
Evils
Devils
Line 07 & Line 08
Perseverance
Reverence

Line 01:
Yell at Serene Omnipresent
        The God is present everywhere at all times. (omni-present) God is calm, and free from disturbance (serene). Human beings are totally disturbed always and by all means. Man with plenty of Requirements, Stress and Strain, needs moral or emotional strength from external resources.
        So man with disturbed mood will shout with louder voice or cry or make sudden scream (yell) in front of the Almighty to explain his problems and makes Him as a means of ventilation.
After complete exertion, he cools down and requests Him forgive his ill activities, sins etc., then prays to fulfill his requirements.

Line 02:
Amazing Treasures ever descent   
        Beyond our thinking he has fabulous, marvelous, (amazing) incredible surprising, respectable, surplus wealth in all forms. He is ready to afford unlimited things that we need or request Him. He is a great Donor. None could compete with Him.

Line 03:
Adorable Memorable Supernatural
Almighty is more loveable, (adorable) attractive ever memorable,shapeless (Supernatural) Being with all powers to control the course of all human events. Nature

Line 04:
       Lovely gifts Remarkable and Immortal
        He provides appealing, beautiful, pleasant, undestroyable everlasting gifts to human beings.

Line 05:
Liberates from threatening evils
        He is the one who has the capacity to release man from tragic developments and make him free from objectionable behavior, harmful animating force within living things and disembodied supernatural beings (evils) that can become visible or audible (or both) to human beings.

Line 06:
       Arming with shield from devils
        He acts as an armament (arming) to all His devotees and protects them from all sorts of dangers and harms given physically, mentally, socially, emotionally, etc., by human beings. He also protects from cruel, wicked and powerful, inhuman persons or animals unusual or deformed creatures (abnormally large and havingvarious human and animal parts)and also from the negative supernatural beings (invisible/ partly visible/ inaudible/partly visible/ partly audible etc.,).

Line 07:
Holy Champion of all perseverance
        He is a versatile genius, skilled in all fields along with the power of divinity. He institutes His stern, never ending persistence on earth and on the Universe as a whole.

 Line 08:
        Dot and beg Him with reverence.

The poet informs that one should pin-pointedly identify, feel and locate Him. Supplicate Him with the feelings of deep, penetrating, emotional and intellectual respects.So that, He could feel sympathy on us and bless us with his holy gifts.

No comments:

Post a Comment