OMNIPRESENT
Yell
at Serene Omnipresent
Amazing
Treasures ever descent
Adorable
Memorable Supernatural
Lovely
gifts Remarkable and Immortal
Liberates
from threatening evils
Arming
with shield from devils
Holy
Champion of all perseverance
Dot
and beg Him with reverence.
PRELUDE:
The
poet is highly pious in nature. He daily starts his day only with prayer. He
has a prominentdesire in prayer. He has long-lasting belief that all the events
and happeningsgo around him are only due to God. He also believes that God is
present everywhere. So he started his first poem with the title ‘OMNIPRESENT’which
means that ‘God is Present Everywhere’.
The poet feels that many poems written
by different poets are interpreted in different manner in accordance with the
mentality of the reader / interpreter. Mostly, the intention of the poet and
the basic concept of the poemismisinterpreted in such a manner that the whole
content of the poem is entirely deviated from his/her original thoughts.
This
shows that the purpose of writing the poem is not achieved and the concept of
the poem does not reach the reader as perceived and expressed by the poet.
Therefore, the poet explains conceptual
framework conveyed by him in each and every line of the poem. It does not mean
that the reader should confine his thinking with what is given by the poet. He
puts forward his views and expects the readers read the poem along with the
track given by him and frees the readers to interpret the meaning and concept
of the poem at their own pace of thinking. The poet leads the readers in the
tracked thinking and frees them to think in their own multi-faceted manner.
Frame work:
The
poet has written the poem in eight lines. In order to restore the poetic sense,
like rhyming words, he combines consecutive odd and even lines.
The Rhyming Words in this poem are:
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First Pair
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Line 01 &Line 02
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Omnipresent
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Descent
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Line 03&Line 04
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Supernatural
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Immortal
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Line 05 & Line
06
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Evils
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Devils
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Line 07 & Line
08
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Perseverance
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Reverence
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Line 01:
Yell at Serene Omnipresent
The
God is present everywhere at all times. (omni-present) God is calm, and free
from disturbance (serene). Human beings are totally disturbed always and
by all means. Man with plenty of Requirements, Stress and Strain, needs moral
or emotional strength from external resources.
So man with disturbed mood will shout
with louder voice or cry or make sudden scream (yell) in front of the Almighty
to explain his problems and makes Him as a means of ventilation.
After
complete exertion, he cools down and requests Him forgive his ill activities,
sins etc., then prays to fulfill his requirements.
Line 02:
Amazing Treasures ever descent
Beyond our thinking he has fabulous,
marvelous, (amazing) incredible surprising, respectable, surplus wealth in all
forms. He is ready to afford unlimited things that we need or request Him. He
is a great Donor. None could compete with Him.
Line 03:
Adorable Memorable Supernatural
Almighty
is more loveable, (adorable) attractive ever memorable,shapeless (Supernatural)
Being with all powers to control the course of all human events. Nature
Line
04:
Lovely gifts Remarkable and Immortal
He provides appealing, beautiful,
pleasant, undestroyable everlasting gifts to human beings.
Line 05:
Liberates from threatening evils
He is the one who has the capacity to release
man from tragic developments and make him free from objectionable behavior,
harmful animating force within living things and disembodied supernatural
beings (evils) that can become visible or audible (or both) to human beings.
Line 06:
Arming with shield from devils
He acts as an armament (arming) to all His
devotees and protects them from all sorts of dangers and harms given physically,
mentally, socially, emotionally, etc., by human beings. He also protects from cruel,
wicked and powerful, inhuman persons or animals unusual or deformed creatures (abnormally
large and havingvarious human and animal parts)and also from the negative supernatural
beings (invisible/ partly visible/ inaudible/partly visible/ partly audible
etc.,).
Line 07:
Holy Champion of all perseverance
He is a versatile genius, skilled in all
fields along with the power of divinity. He institutes His stern, never ending persistence
on earth and on the Universe as a whole.
Line 08:
Dot and beg Him
with reverence.
The
poet informs that one should pin-pointedly identify, feel and locate Him.
Supplicate Him with the feelings of deep, penetrating, emotional and
intellectual respects.So that, He could feel sympathy on us and bless us with
his holy gifts.
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