Monday, 2 March 2015

DAUGHTER
Dolly resident pleasant angel
Allays  wrath soothe evangel
Ukelele four caliber beigel
Gelidity heart Bart cudgel
Haul tendril peril aerogel
Taut retool cool degel
Edge love behoove spiegel
Ridge forth worth Rigel
Line 01:
Dolly resident Pleasant angel
          The poet represents his sweet daughter as a doll. She plays a significant role in his life. He affirms that her appealing emotions and child like behavior make him enjoyable.
          From the date of her birth he presumes her in his heart as a supernatural person of God

Line 02:
Allays wrath soothe evangel
          She reduces  his high pitch anger and nullifies his warlike attitude.  The teachings and the events in the life of Jesus are given in the New Testament to channelize the mankind. The poet compares the moral and emotional attempts made by his daughter with teachings given in the New Testament.

Line 03:
Ukelele four caliber beigel
          Ukelele is a small guitar that makes us feel the heart soft pleasant music. It has only four Strings. The poet compares his daughter with Ukelele and he four strings with the four attributes namely shyness, modesty, humility, reticent.
          In times of anger she seems to be rough and hard, but actually she is tender by heart. He compares her nature with beigela soft live yeast seems to be like a raised doughnut shaped roll with strong hard outer layer. He perceives this apparent individual nature of his daughter as an unique grade of excellence.

Line 04:
Gelidity heart Bark cudgel
          The poet is totally covered by with love, affection and care of his daughter. Since he has been living in a hot professional atmosphere he views the situation to be a cold environment that makes him cool from all tensions.
          In case of disturbance or emergence she surrounds the poet as a team of multiple fighting instruments (cudgel) and fights in all directions to save him. By the time she will give the top position ‘Baron’ to the poet and takes the next position ‘Bart’

Line 05:
Haul tendril peril aerogel
          The poet says his daughter slowly draws his thinking, expressions and actions around him as a slender  stem of twining plants. She completely covers him as extremely low density weightless insulator (aerogel). By doing this she protects him from the probable declinations, disadvantages, fiscal loss, and any sort of danger that may arise.

Line 06:
Taut retool cool degel
          When the poet is drawn tight and put into great tensiontaut at once his daughter enters and reorganizes the situation in order to improve his strength, nullify the negative effects of the situation and makes him update everything.
She makes him cool by clearing all tensions. Her multiple actions make the poet compare her with the thin translucent membranes (degel) of different colours used over the stage light for the colour effects. By this the poet says she makes his life more colorful.

Line 07:
Edge love behoove Spiegel
The poet says, his great love affection for his daughter is very sharp and clearly defined.
The quality of pig iron is improved to steel by deoxidation, where spiegel is used as a deoxidizing agent.The essential attitudes of the poet are improved by his daughter as Spiegel to higher grade of excellence and make him indispensable to the society.

Line 08:
Ridge forth worth Rigel
          The poet says the time ahead in future of his life with his daughter moves like a long narrow range of hills and adds that her love towards him is of great value to him.

          Recalling the past experiences and dreaming of the prospective apprehensions that are yet to come made him compare his daughter with the brightest Star Rigel (Beta Orionis) in Orion constellation that lies east to Taurus visible on equator.

TEXTURE OF THE POEM:
          The texture of the poem is completely unique. This poem is interwoven by eight rows and four columns. The eight rows are presented as eight lines with four columns filled by four words each.
          It is a smart piece consisting of thirty two words only.

The Salient features of the poem are:
·         The first alphabet in each line forms the title of the poem‘DAUGHTER’.
·         The first word of each line give four pairs of rhyming words namely.
ü  Dolly : Allay
ü  Haul : Taut
ü  Ukelele : Geledity
ü  Edge : Ridge
·         This seems to be like a cut border of a cloth with four parts.
·         This seems to be like a continous border of the cloth with even rhyming words.
·         The fourth word of each line end with – get.
·         The fourth word of each line rhymes with other line.
1.   Angel
2.   Evangel
3.   Beigel
4.   Cudgel
5.   Aerogel
6.   Degel
7.   Spiegel
8.   Rigel
·         The second and third words of each line form twin flower design in the cloth. The rhyming mid-words in each line are:
1.   Resident
:
Pleasant
2.   Wrath
:
soothe
3.   Four
:
Caliber
4.   Heart
:
Bart
5.   Tendril
:
Peril
6.   Retool
:
Cool
7.   Love
:
Behoove
8.   Forth
:
Worth

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