DAUGHTER
Dolly resident
pleasant angel
Allays wrath soothe evangel
Ukelele four
caliber beigel
Gelidity heart Bart
cudgel
Haul tendril peril
aerogel
Taut retool cool
degel
Edge love behoove
spiegel
Ridge forth worth
Rigel
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Dolly resident Pleasant angel
The poet represents his sweet daughter
as a doll. She plays a significant role in his life. He affirms that her
appealing emotions and child like behavior make him enjoyable.
From the date of her birth he presumes
her in his heart as a supernatural person of God
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02:
Allays wrath soothe
evangel
She reduces his high pitch anger and nullifies his warlike
attitude. The teachings and the events
in the life of Jesus are given in the New Testament to channelize the mankind.
The poet compares the moral and emotional attempts made by his daughter with
teachings given in the New Testament.
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03:
Ukelele four caliber
beigel
Ukelele is a small guitar that makes
us feel the heart soft pleasant music. It has only four Strings. The poet
compares his daughter with Ukelele and he four strings with the four attributes
namely shyness, modesty, humility, reticent.
In times of anger she seems to be
rough and hard, but actually she is tender by heart. He compares her nature
with beigela soft live yeast seems to be like a raised doughnut shaped roll
with strong hard outer layer. He perceives this apparent individual nature of
his daughter as an unique grade of excellence.
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04:
Gelidity heart Bark cudgel
The poet is totally covered by with love,
affection and care of his daughter. Since he has been living in a hot professional
atmosphere he views the situation to be a cold environment that makes him cool
from all tensions.
In case of disturbance or emergence
she surrounds the poet as a team of multiple fighting instruments (cudgel) and
fights in all directions to save him. By the time she will give the top
position ‘Baron’ to the poet and takes the next position ‘Bart’
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05:
Haul tendril peril
aerogel
The
poet says his daughter slowly draws his thinking, expressions and actions
around him as a slender stem of twining
plants. She completely covers him as extremely low density weightless insulator
(aerogel). By doing this she protects him from the probable declinations,
disadvantages, fiscal loss, and any sort of danger that may arise.
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06:
Taut retool cool degel
When the poet is drawn tight and put
into great tensiontaut at once his daughter enters and reorganizes the
situation in order to improve his strength, nullify the negative effects of the
situation and makes him update everything.
She makes him cool by clearing all tensions. Her
multiple actions make the poet compare her with the thin translucent membranes
(degel) of different colours used over the stage light for the colour effects.
By this the poet says she makes his life more colorful.
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Edge love behoove Spiegel
The poet says, his
great love affection for his daughter is very sharp and clearly defined.
The quality of pig iron is improved to steel by
deoxidation, where spiegel is used as a deoxidizing agent.The essential
attitudes of the poet are improved by his daughter as Spiegel to higher grade
of excellence and make him indispensable to the society.
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08:
Ridge forth worth Rigel
The poet says the time ahead in future
of his life with his daughter moves like a long narrow range of hills and adds
that her love towards him is of great value to him.
Recalling the past experiences and
dreaming of the prospective apprehensions that are yet to come made him compare
his daughter with the brightest Star Rigel (Beta Orionis) in Orion
constellation that lies east to Taurus visible on equator.
TEXTURE OF THE POEM:
The texture of the poem is completely
unique. This poem is interwoven by eight rows and four columns. The eight rows
are presented as eight lines with four columns filled by four words each.
It is a smart piece consisting of
thirty two words only.
The Salient features of the poem are:
·
The first
alphabet in each line forms the title of the poem‘DAUGHTER’.
·
The first word
of each line give four pairs of rhyming words namely.
ü
Dolly :
Allay
ü
Haul : Taut
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ü
Ukelele :
Geledity
ü
Edge : Ridge
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·
This seems to
be like a cut border of a cloth with four parts.
·
This seems to
be like a continous border of the cloth with even rhyming words.
·
The fourth word
of each line end with – get.
·
The fourth
word of each line rhymes with other line.
1. Angel
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2. Evangel
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3. Beigel
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4. Cudgel
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5. Aerogel
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6. Degel
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7. Spiegel
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8. Rigel
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·
The second and
third words of each line form twin flower design in the cloth. The rhyming mid-words
in each line are:
1. Resident
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Pleasant
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2. Wrath
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soothe
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3. Four
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Caliber
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4. Heart
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Bart
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5. Tendril
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Peril
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6. Retool
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Cool
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7. Love
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Behoove
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8. Forth
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Worth
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