Sunday, 25 January 2015

BACK BONE
Smart in manifold actions – with
Art of Presenting modem attraction
Intended pleasant changes – That
Tended wing me superior ranges
Rightly carried my off springs
Brightly brought them up like springs
Attends Critical junctions –And
Pretends unstirred by functions
Just in home affairs  -But
Adjust with sentimental despairs
Upholds family status assume –And
Holds Conversant relatives resume
Never leaves me alone
Ever moves with me like clone
Numbers program rated – Also
Remembers for the Coming event dates
Involves improving domestic facilities
Resolves internal problem and difficulties
Stimulates projects generously
Accumulates energies achieve liberally
Serves my crazy parents –And
Deserves commendable worth decent
Always behind me the one – who
Plays herself my stiff backbone

The poet has written this poem ‘Backbone’ with pleasure Actually he wanted to give a memorable present to her. All things can be numerically valued in terms of money. But the love expressed by encoding his sweet memories as hidden thoughts into words in paper. After writing this poem he still feels that there are no proper words to express his feelings completely. He challenges that there is no proper scale to convert his feelings into numerical values. So no one could work on costing this poem. So the cost of the poem is infinite. He also requests the scientists to invent an equipment to calibrate his feelings.
        He explains the prominent characteristics and distinguishing qualities of his spouse.
        The Poet in his Poem, ‘Backbone’ presents twelve different attributes of his life partner. All the twelve project in twelve positive dimendions in which he gains more. He visualizes twelve different personalities in her, namely

 ü    Best Presenter                     ü Change Maker
 ü Sweet Germinator                 ü Silent Solver
 ü Social Justice                       ü Status Maintainer
 ü Smooth Coexistor                 ü Corporate Programmer
 ü Active Resolver                     ü Energy Aggregate
 ü Elders Protector                     ü Stern Supporter

 Line 01:

BEST PRESENTER
Smart in manifold actions – with
Art of Presenting modern attraction
        The character specified in this poem is more resourceful alert in doing different multiple works at a time or in course of time. He also adds that the display mode and presentation style of the work output is novel and pleasing to eye and mind.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Smart : Art
Pair 02 : Action : Attraction

Line 02:

CHANGE MAKER
Intended pleasant changes – That
Tended wing me superior ranges
        The Character of this poem has enjoyable, lovely purpose in her mind to transform in a district manner he should perform so the poet puts her stand above others in all respect. She above others in all respects. She expect that the poet should fly high with his innovative and progressive thinking and actions.
        The word ‘images’ here refers to a variety of things and activities of excellent caliber 

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Intended : Tended
Pair 02: Changes : Ranges

Line 03:

SWEET GERMINATOR
Rightly carried my off springs
Brightly brought them up like springs
She carried both my daughter and son in her. As a matter her right
        To everyone’s surprise she brought up both of them with love and care in such a way that the ground water flow  with force from the ground.
        Here the poet compares the knowledge, Character and behavior of his young ones with springs which move spontaneously.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Rightly : Brightly
Pair 02: Offspring’s : Springs


Line 04:

SILENT SOLVER
Attends Critical junctions –And
Pretends unstirred by functions
Every day she comes across different types of problems Complicated together with the persisting ones. The poet refers this collection  of problems as junction.
        The problems are of urgent nature which should be attended essentially without omission. So the poet calls them critical.
        The poet says that after attending and solving all the critical problems she exhibits herself as if nothing is happened.  She does not expose the feelings to the poet about that are emotions or problematic fanatic or happened to her and her family.   

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Attends : Pretends
Pair 02 : Junctions : Functions

Line 05:

SOCIAL JUSTICE
Just in home affairs - But
Adjust with sentimental despairs
        Among the your ones, relatives of both sides, families and friends she keeps herself in the place of a Jury due to her fair nature in looking at the issues and solving the problems. At the same time she adjusts with the disparities arouse due to sentimental issues and give hope to all to solve the problems. In this line he expresses her stand in two opposite directions.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Just : Adjust
Pair 02: Affair : Despair


Line 06:

STATUS MAINTAINER
Upholds family status assume –And
Holds Conversant relatives resume
        She accepts the family as it is and supports all the favourable incidents and events mean white she reach against all the opposing the situations that need great physical or mental effort to  complete it. successfully to raise and maintain the family status. She knows the relatives thoroughly and holds them assume a new. She expects to be well informed about all person and event about and around the poet.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Uphold : Hold
Pair 02 : Assume : resume

Line 07:

SMOOTH COEXISTOR
Never leaves me alone
Ever moves with me like clone
The spouse of the poet never allows him alone. She accompanies him in all walks of his life.
        ‘Clone’ is a person who is almost identical to another one. knowing this, the poet metaphorically calls her spouse as clone with the inner meaning that she is exactly identical with him in thinking, action, words and in all aspects. (except her physical being) so he calls her clone and moves with him at all time.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Never : Ever
Pair 02: Alone : Clone


Line 08:

CORPORATE PROGRAMMER
Numbers program rated – Also
Remembers for the forth Coming event dates
        According to the poet his spouse is a personal assistant to him, in designing his future plans fixing his appointments, properly costing his work and punctually collecting the incidental benefit awarded for his job.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Number : Remember
Pair 02: Rates : Dates

Line 09:

ACTIVE RESOLVER
Involves improving domestic facilities
Resolves internal problem and difficulties
She engages herself with interest in ameliorating concerns pertaining to internal affairs, and family affairs. She designs his activities and initiates serve all domestic functions and afford multiple conveniences needed to uplift his family.
She lists out the needs, problems, difficulties, etc, she explores  root causes for all the above. After proper attempts, she brings everything to an end.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Involves : Resolves
Pair 02: Facilities : difficulties

Line 10:

ENERGY AGGREGATE
Stimulates projects generously
Accumulates energies achieve liberally
She acts as a stimulant. She channelizes the poet to execute his every unit task with free hearted, free-handedness in a Planned selfless manner.
        She collects all sorts of forces together ambitious drive, healthy power visualized future plan and action, to make the poet powerful. She gains the benefits of the progressive reformative projects with social views through the poet.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Stimulates : Accumulates
Pair 02: Generously : Liberally

Line 11:

ELDERS PROTECTOR
Serves my crazy parents –And
Deserves commendable worth decent
        She fulfils all the needs of the intensively enthusiastic unsound parents of the poet with care like a mother. Her motherly feeling of liking is more appreciable. It emphasizes her liking an admirable quality. It is her strange action which of regard, value and kindness. Appreciating her in this regard is accepted conventionally.

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Serve : Deserve
Pair 02: Present : Decent

Line 12:

STERN SUPPORTOR
Always behind me the one – who
Plays herself my stiff backbone
It is a known feet that behind the success of every successful man there is a force of direction motivation and action.
        The poet considers his spouse as the force behind him in all his industrious  undertakings.
        She performs the role of irresistible powerful central balanced source of Support

Rhyming Words:
Pair 01: Always : Plays
Pair 02: One : backbone

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